assignment #2 A chosen scene that has been re-written into a modern version
Act 1, scene 2
Re-write
At a military base near the city the forres, President of Scotland Duncan talks to wounded sergeant who gets shoot in the war field and ask him for the battle progress against the Irish soldiers, who are led by the Capitan Macdonwald. The sergeant who was wounded help in the mission to help escape Duncan’s son Malcolm captured by the Irish soldiers. The sergeant said that Generals Macbeth and banquo fought and they infiltrate in the enemy base to rescue Malcolm then the sergeant describes to president Duncan how general Macbeth take down the Irish captain Macdonwald. Then Ross, a Scottish general, enters and tells to President Duncan that the captain of Cawdor has been defeated and the army forces of Norway repelled. President Duncan said that Capitan of Cawdor have to be sentenced to death and that General Macbeth, who led the army forces to a victory, be given the Cawdor’s title and territory. General Ross leaves to tell the good news to General Macbeth.
Re-write
At a military base near the city the forres, President of Scotland Duncan talks to wounded sergeant who gets shoot in the war field and ask him for the battle progress against the Irish soldiers, who are led by the Capitan Macdonwald. The sergeant who was wounded help in the mission to help escape Duncan’s son Malcolm captured by the Irish soldiers. The sergeant said that Generals Macbeth and banquo fought and they infiltrate in the enemy base to rescue Malcolm then the sergeant describes to president Duncan how general Macbeth take down the Irish captain Macdonwald. Then Ross, a Scottish general, enters and tells to President Duncan that the captain of Cawdor has been defeated and the army forces of Norway repelled. President Duncan said that Capitan of Cawdor have to be sentenced to death and that General Macbeth, who led the army forces to a victory, be given the Cawdor’s title and territory. General Ross leaves to tell the good news to General Macbeth.